Angel of Death

Hey there Shina! I really liked this and it looks like all the nitpicks have been done, but really I don't see anything wrong with this. Usually, when I review ...

Hello Ash! Wow, haven't talked to you in a long time, but I hope all is well and I'm really glad to see that you posted another chapter of this. ...

Awe, Jared that was good! The music went well with the lyrics and for some reason, it made me think of The Phantom of the Opera . With Cat's amazing ...

Hey there Sunny! Girls are strange things. Well, for the record, men are too. You just notice girls more. This is a good beginning, you have great characterization. I automatically ...

Hey Sunny!! I just thought I'd read this since I haven't read anything yours and this is more recent. A glob of strawberry jam slips off the edge of my ...

Hey Krupp! I'm really liking your style. I might have said this before, but tis is true. You have this really meaningful and powerful way of writing and thank God ...

Hey Mars! Just thought I'd check out a more recent poem of yours and I really liked this one as well. You should really think about writing a book of ...

Bravisimo! Gosh, this is beautiful! I really am speechless. I mean, I felt the emotion behind this and I'm glad that this was randomly floating around and I randomly decided ...

Zomg! I loved this. Well, I really must say that you didn't let rhyme eat up the message that you were trying to get across. This was very creative and ...

Wow, these are all amazing. You are truly made of awesomeness. I will try to listen to these sometimes because the lyrics look awesome. I've read the first part of ...

Hola Ash! Mrs. Adams met her daughters gaze and sighed deeply. “Lady Darnold as been gracious to offer us a home here in her cousin absence.” It should be: Mrs. ...

Hello there! Well, I agree with Rosey up there that you are using sweet way to much. It sorta takes away from the beauty of the poem, because you start ...

Hello Ash! It was nice to feel the earth beneath one’s shoes, to breathe the pure air, to hear the crunch as we made a path through the thickly packed ...

Hey Ky! Gosh, I feel terrible that this took me a whole month to get too, but since all of the grammatical errors in such were picked out, I'm just ...

Hey there krupp! Well, I really liked this. I'm a sucker for dark things because I think that people tend to write too many happy stories and poems too much ...